{"id":987,"date":"2014-09-18T13:36:10","date_gmt":"2014-09-18T20:36:10","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/pages.palomar.edu\/eminamide\/?p=987"},"modified":"2014-09-18T13:37:17","modified_gmt":"2014-09-18T20:37:17","slug":"its-not-holy-writ-dillard-on-writing-and-revising","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/pages.palomar.edu\/eminamide\/2014\/09\/18\/its-not-holy-writ-dillard-on-writing-and-revising\/","title":{"rendered":"“It’s Not Holy Writ”: Dillard on Writing and Revising"},"content":{"rendered":"

I began this semester in English 50 by reading two pieces by Annie Dillard. The first, an excerpt from her book, Holy the Firm<\/em>, about a moth that flies into a candle’s flame; the second, an essay called “How I Wrote the Moth Essay–and Why.”<\/p>\n

There’s a lot to love about Dillard’s\u00a0approach to writing. I\u00a0especially love that she has amassed and indexed over 30 of her own journals which she relies on for her own writings, her own personal Google database, if you will. I also love her remarks on writing and revising:<\/p>\n

On getting started:<\/strong><\/p>\n

“How do you go from nothing to something? How do you face the blank page without fainting dead away? To start a narrative, you need a batch of things. Not feelings, not opinions, not sentiments, not judgments, not arguments, but specific objects and events: a cat, a spider web, a mess of insect skeletons, a candle, a book about Rimbaud, a burning moth.”<\/p>\n

“What do you do with these things? You juggle them. You toss them around \u00a0. . . you need bits of the world to toss around. You start anywhere, and join the bits into a pattern by your writing about them. Later you can throw out the ones that don’t fit.<\/p><\/blockquote>\n

On revising:\u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n

“[Revising] requires . . .\u00a0nerves of steel and lots of coffee.”<\/p>\n

“It doesn’t hurt much to babble in a first draft, so long as you have the sense to cut out irrelevancies later”<\/p>\n

“The most inept writing has an inadvertent element of suspense: the reader constantly asks himself, where on earth is this going?”<\/p>\n

“Usually I end up throwing away the beginning: the first part of a poem, the first few pages of an essay, the first scene of a story, even the first few chapters of a book. It’s not holy write.”<\/p>\n

“Revising is a breeze if you know what you’re doing–if you can look at your text coldly, analytically, manipulatively.”<\/p><\/blockquote>\n

On engaging her readers:<\/strong><\/p>\n

“I try to give the reader a story, or at least a scene (the flimsiest narrative occasion will serve), and something to look at.”<\/p>\n

“I try not to hang on to the reader’s arm and bore him with my life story, my fancy self-indulgent writing, or my opinions. He is my guest; I try to entertain him. Or he’ll throw my pages across the room and turn on the television.”<\/p><\/blockquote>\n

My favorite: “It’s not holy writ.”<\/p>\n

More\u00a0important to me, working with students in a beginning composition class, is the phases\u00a0of writing (yes, the process), than the final product. Show me where you started, I tell them, show me the messy trail that began\u00a0with those\u00a0first scribbles in your writing journal to that MLA-formatted final draft. I’ll read the final draft and give it a grade, yes. But if I don’t see a finished product that’s much different from the early drafts, the final grade suffers.<\/p>\n

I tell my students\u00a0this, but I’m not sure they hear, not sure they care.<\/p>\n

Some do, though. I was pleased to see a few students getting the idea in a fairly inconsequential early writing assignment, a narrative paragraph, describing a place they’d visited. They brought their paragraphs to class, but I didn’t collect them. We talked about Dillard,\u00a0on hands and knees\u00a0in her bathroom, peering at the discarded\u00a0remains of sow bugs (“those little armadillo creatures who live to travel flat out in houses, and die round”), earwigs, moths (“wingless and huge and empty”), that have collected behind her toilet, beneath a spider’s web, and marvel (I did, anyway) at the writer’s interest in things most of us would sweep up or vacuum away. There, in the detritus, a story, a narrative, a life lesson.<\/p>\n

What do you see? What does it feel like? Smell like? Look like? Show me!<\/p>\n

I allocated\u00a0class time to experiment on their drafts, then sent them home to revise (“It’s not holy writ!”). The next class session, I collected both drafts, and read them yesterday.<\/p>\n

Some\u00a0got the idea. I saw scribbles and notes on the first drafts, incorporated into the second, and gave them 10 points for trying. A few students turned in two drafts, virtually identical. I gave them 5 points for not trying. The occasional student\u00a0rose to the challenge and wowed me.\u00a0Carina’s, I show here.\u00a0Students like this make it all pretty much worthwhile.<\/p>\n

\"Narative<\/a>\"Narrative<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

I began this semester in English 50 by reading two pieces by Annie Dillard. The first, an excerpt from her book, Holy the Firm, about a moth that flies into a candle’s flame; the second, an essay called “How I … Continue reading →<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":53,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-987","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-uncategorized"],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_shortlink":"https:\/\/wp.me\/p3e3Em-fV","_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/pages.palomar.edu\/eminamide\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/987","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/pages.palomar.edu\/eminamide\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/pages.palomar.edu\/eminamide\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/pages.palomar.edu\/eminamide\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/53"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/pages.palomar.edu\/eminamide\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=987"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/pages.palomar.edu\/eminamide\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/987\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":991,"href":"https:\/\/pages.palomar.edu\/eminamide\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/987\/revisions\/991"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/pages.palomar.edu\/eminamide\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=987"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/pages.palomar.edu\/eminamide\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=987"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/pages.palomar.edu\/eminamide\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=987"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}